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Let's just talk about what we just read. (See what I did there?)
Who's examples just made you crazy?
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Good evening to our #WritingCommunity friends. Gather 'round the table and introduce yourself.
I chose 'just' because it was first on Harlow's List of Useless Words. What is your biggest offender?
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In Two Hours Time, 'Just.'
I just want you to just do a search of a WIP and just find the first two “justs” in it. Then just share those lines, with line numbers.
#LineByLineTime .
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A Zebra and a blunt. Free-flowing through my lunch... #BigSketchEnergy #SelfMode #TheArtsBishop #LineByLineTime
#LineByLineTime , the Mini-Critique hour excitement begins in 5 minutes.
Tonight we embarrass ourselves by sharing the first two instances of 'just' in a WIP. Post page numbers.
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George Beckman- Books from Graestone #LineByLineTime I'll tell on myself. This is from Prisoner of the Past. The whole document just has 43 instances, but most are in dialogue.
Now I challenge everyone else to tell on themselves. No one is perfect.
George Beckman- Books from Graestone #LineByLineTime Here we go. This is from Prisoner of the Past. At this point, Hannah is involved in an investigation that Jake is conducting. As such they can't really date, but are poking at the edges for what will become a solid relationship later.
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Let's talk about what we just read. Any bit characters you would like to hear more from?
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Good evening to our #WritingCommunity friends. Gather 'round the table and introduce yourself.
Are/were you a phone or in-person date asker?
It’s Time to Share Your Writing. This is a mini-critique hour, so make suggestions to help us hone our skills.
Post your snippet as a reply to this message. If you can’t find the thread, click on my icon and scroll down. It will be right there.
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For May 29th, we'll do one more crutch word— 'looked,' because it's my nemesis. My Characters all have 20/20 vision.
Search a piece of your writing for the first two instances of looked. (Looks if you write in the present tense.)
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George Beckman- Books from Graestone #LineByLineTime From PotP. Hannah has just been released from prison. Like only a few paragraphs before this. While she is free, the freedom does have a small price.
George Beckman- Books from Graestone #LineByLineTime This is from Fork in the Road. Morgan is in the hospital and while Josh and Rab are visiting her (she's asleep), Morgan's biological dad comes in. He says something and Josh light into him with thoughts he has on his mind for years. Content Warning - swearing.
George Beckman- Books from Graestone #LineByLineTime This is from Prisoner of the Past, probably shared before, but I had to grab something quick. Cable has been stalking Hannah and this is the first time he contacts her since she left prison.
In Two Hours Time, we share a selection with 'The Date.' 𝑇ℎ𝑒 𝐴𝑠𝑘—a character asking someone out. Make it a fun (awkward?) moment.
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It’s Time to Share Your Writing. This is a mini-critique hour, so make suggestions to help us hone our skills.
Post your snippet as a reply to this message. If you can’t find the thread, click on my icon and scroll down. It will be right there.
#LineByLineTime
Wednesday, May 22nd, 9 pm Eastern Time: 'Just.' Search for the first two times 'just' appears in your MS and share.
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#LineByLineTime , the Mini-Critique hour excitement begins in 5 minutes.
Tonight, we share 240-word excerpts with a character asking someone for a date.
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